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Down the Escape Shute

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*Edit* So looking back at this, I guess it's not *that* bad. I won't scrap it, but I still think I could have done way better with it.

There's a hidden flea, too.

*EDIT*

:iconbloodsoakedcutie: found the flea! :iconzonzonfleaplz:
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

First of all let me say. I LOVE YOUR USE OF COLORS. This has a very comic book feel to it. I also have to say I love when people use a simple tool (MS paint) and create amazing artwork with it. The warm colors add even more dynamic heat to the action. The anatomy is done very well in my opinion. The character is very "solid." The background is well crafted. I feel like I am looking at a scene and not just a piece of pin up art. It makes me anticipate what happens next when he reaches the bottom.

That being said there is a small area for improvement for this piece, and that is the motion. I am not feeling the gravity of the characters descent. I get the idea, but I do not "feel" the idea. I counted three conflicting action lines, which may be the issue. Also the the rope or cable might be throwing this off since it wasn't shaded. Adding volume to the rope very well could have solved everything.

REGARDLESS .. I was VERY impressed with what you pulled off here. This has inspired me to look at other tools to create my own work. You walking proof that it is not the TOOL that makes the artist, but the ARTIST that shapes the tools.

Well done!